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i really don't know if i like this
i think its something todo with the fact that because of all this gallery work ive been doing my mind is stuck in 'standalone picture' mode.
this being part of a story, not only that, a fight sequence means my mind cant get it.

thumbnailing 7STRING led to a want to do up one of my little sketches all proper like... this is like 40 pages into my planned epic but ive only drawn 8.

tell me what you honestly think

i know i like the background so if you dis that i'll kick you

been listening to roni size hence the name

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:icongermancitygirl:
Wicked sense of movement!

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:iconspurs06:
great picture :-)

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:iconnetherflux:
cheers
i'll need more convincing tho....

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:iconnetherflux:
awesome
glad you said that... i was afraid i had lost that somewhere in the inks
cheers

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:iconmap-map:
Sorry to poop on the parade, but I think it may be a little wrong on the composition it doesn't have the lovely angles that you normally do which give that hyper exaggerated in a good way feel it's side by side streets of rage-esque makes ME have a more static feel, O O O maybe it's the portrait A4 ness maybe if you cropped off the top which isn't doing too much it would have a very nice long shot of him bllam-oi-ng him across the page? although then you'd lose your lovely background...slightly.

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:iconnetherflux:
truuuuuu
i get what your saying... it think it is my over zealous protection of my background which has eaten up my dynamic
still... i want to redo it now with some awesome perspecto shit so thank you

liked the streets of rage analogy
helpful

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:iconquantum-kid:
I agree with the other person who said that there is a great sense of movement. I don't think it's static, but I also agree that your awesome angles aren't there as much. It might be cool to try drawing the same thing but from a different perspective. Great job all round!
:icongouch:
I think it all looks very well drawn, but somehow a little static, like perhaps some dust coming rom the guy on the left's feet, to suggest that the impact has slid him back a bit, and I couldn't say what is was about the guy on the right, but something just makes him not look like he's taken out the lamp post. Like, don't take it badly, I think it looks awsome, everything is drawn awsome and your characters look brill, but there are a couple things that are missing that make them look like they aren't quite in your maticulously drawn background. Couldn't say what those things are though, unfortunately lol.
:iconadrian-malseraph:
I'm with these guys. The pic could totally use some more dynamic elements.

Getting that, without changing the background, may require moving one of the characters into a different pose, or something.

Otherwise, ULTRA PERSPECTIVE GET!
:icongeekstreet:
hey dude. awesome image, although perhaps a bit of foreshortening or summin? bring a bit of punch into it? not sure the side angle is doin justice to the action in the image.

but ultimatly it look wikid.

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